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Re: Orange Peel and Apple Pips
I really like this but I don't have anything to complain about. This was beautiful yet the humor painted the right thoughts, which I never seem to find in some ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis "Oh, I'm sorry," I said, moving to the side. It was a girl. By the sound of her voice she seemed lost, frustrated about something. I listened closely to ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
*Sorry if I'm late* Artemis I fluttered my eyes, hoping to find my way through these unfamiliar streets. My eyes were veiled with darkness but I knew that there were ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Enchanting Rome Part II
Wow! I really loved this part of the story, I hope you continue writing. Your descriptions were flawless, it almost makes me feel like I was really there. Umm...I don't ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Kissed to death
This was weird but it was good. Um you certainly have the rhyming down and the story is a bit...understandable. Only its the last stanza that is bothering me. Now ...
Jun 27, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Not really but you do have gorgeous eyes.
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: The Possession
Hey BBB!! Thanks for PMing me because yay, I'm the first to post. Ok I only got to read half of this but I'll be back I promise. I didn't ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
This sounds cool. Name: Artemis Storm Gender: Female Age: 21 Race: A witch whose powers are unknown to her. Appearance: Is about 5'6'' with long raven black hair. Green eyes, ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
This sounds like a story about a girl or a boy who is kinda tough but find themselves exiled from the world around them. I like the title, maybe if ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: name association
Sounds like a gorgeous mysterious guy who happens to be a vampire. Emerson Pierce
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
known for being awesome and having the best avi's
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Death by Love
You may not think this was your best work but this was good. The message in there was kinda sweet. After death, love is eternal, nothing can render or break ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Petite, white-blond hair, big green eyes. I'd love to have green eyes but actually I have brown and I'm a brunette
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Famous Birthdays
I didn't look it up but I know that I share a birthday with Prince William
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Way Back Home
Wow, this was intense. I felt the emotion, the I don't know what to call it. It just was and that's hope poems should be. It wasn't traditional it just ...
Jun 25, 2008
